Monday, August 3, 2009

time lapse of tree

( revised! )


easy

, uttered soil,

gently does it gently
must you embark upon
these heights

, uttered soil,

and slowly unstow
this render-ready
cargo now

okay now loosen

up now fathom
the storied sky now
have at the sky

, uttered soil,

have at it

3 comments:

jamie said...

what a wonderful image

thekitchenboy said...

i
love
peter's
pommsies

thekitchenboy said...

oh! the old comments came along... but still hold true.

i like the new breaks.